thechronic Posted August 1, 2011 Share Posted August 1, 2011 I made a logo for a company that makes water purification products...thoughts? Never made one for something not tech related before, and to be honest i've not really done a lot of logos. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dick Montage Posted August 1, 2011 Share Posted August 1, 2011 A few points: * It suggests nothing to me. It looks like a blue bee. Is that the desired look? It doesn't tell me what the company does. * Have you considered how this is to be used? Is it to be printed full-colour all the time? If not, then have you provided a monochrome equivalent? And by that I DO NOT mean simply desaturising it. * The colouring looks very washed out, is this intentional? * Has it been designed a a vector, does it scale? * Where is it to be used, does it fit into suitable areas, such as a business card, a banner, a website? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thechronic Posted August 1, 2011 Author Share Posted August 1, 2011 A few points: * It suggests nothing to me. It looks like a blue bee. Is that the desired look? It doesn't tell me what the company does. * Have you considered how this is to be used? Is it to be printed full-colour all the time? If not, then have you provided a monochrome equivalent? And by that I DO NOT mean simply desaturising it. * The colouring looks very washed out, is this intentional? * Has it been designed a a vector, does it scale? * Where is it to be used, does it fit into suitable areas, such as a business card, a banner, a website? its meant to be an angel :pinch: to my knowledge its just for a website the color is very light because i felt darker colours wouldn't be 'fitting'. thank you for your suggestions, i may go back and make some changes :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steven P. Administrators Posted August 1, 2011 Administrators Share Posted August 1, 2011 At first glance it looks like an insect, and first impressions are important :p Also not sure it's a good idea tagging it to religion at all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dick Montage Posted August 1, 2011 Share Posted August 1, 2011 its meant to be an angel Now you say it, I can see it, but........ Hmmm, I'm not sure you have conveyed this. And why an angel? Purification = angelic? I think it's a little bit of a stretch... to my knowledge its just for a website I would check. I would very much ask how the logo is to be used and where. the color is very light because i felt darker colours wouldn't be 'fitting'. Is the site already built and you are replacing a logo? I'm nut suggesting "dark" colours, but maybe more vibrant? Hope some of this helps :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dick Montage Posted August 1, 2011 Share Posted August 1, 2011 I quickly threw this together as an idea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JoeC Posted August 1, 2011 Share Posted August 1, 2011 Nothing says "Water purification" like a nice big oil drip :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thechronic Posted August 1, 2011 Author Share Posted August 1, 2011 Some excellent suggestions here that i will take into account, thank you. I'm not being paid for this, its just something i agreed to do. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dick Montage Posted August 1, 2011 Share Posted August 1, 2011 LOL, the black is simply an alternative if needed - I tend to make logo's able to be expressed in monochrome as well as their full-colour counterpart. Old habbits die hard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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