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[MarkoO]

This is my first game for andorid
and i would like to get some feedback from you guys
could you review my game

https://play.google....myAvoidversion2

here you go link to the "trailer" that i made nothing special because i have no editing skills xD

[Riva]

Didn't play it but based on the screenshots, I would say improve your textures
The way you control the game hides most of the screen with your finger. Perhaps a virtual joystick in either corner based on whether you are left or right-handed?
Also not sure why your game needs Phone Calls permissions. I wouldn't trust it.

Great effort though seems like a simple enough game.

[MarkoO]

yep the textures that are on the screenshots are not the best and i will have to change them. They got all morphed because it needs special width and hight.
About the joystick I made that the whole background the, whole screen as a joystick so you can put your finger in the corner or anywhere on the screen and you will control the player the same way
Phone calls are googleplay thing they just give the developer the statistics of the phone that the game was downloaded on every game has that

[Mikeffer]

Like the look of that mate, well done.

[MarkoO]

thank you for the fast feedback guys

[DonnieJim]

good idea but I would give it a theme. More like a robotron type atmoshpere and not just circles and such. your saving little people or creatures from the bad guys or something like that.
It needs character.
Also have your controls in just one location otherwise your finger is always in the way. Changing the background color really adds no value. It's a design feature that seems just to be there because you learned how to do it. Maybe static backgrounds for each level. Make the point system smaller and bolder.

[MarkoO]

good idea thank you
plus i just made this video on how the touch screen works in the game



but yes i do like your feedback guys
please keep them comming ,you are giving me some good info here

[Guth]

MarkoO, on 30 December 2012 - 12:37, said:

good idea thank you
plus i just made this video on how the touch screen works in the game



but yes i do like your feedback guys
please keep them comming ,you are giving me some good info here

LOL at the F**K when you died!
Dev isnt good at his own game (just kidding)

Looks cool, I'd play but I dont have android

[MarkoO]

Guth, on 30 December 2012 - 12:43, said:

LOL at the F**K when you died!
Dev isnt good at his own game (just kidding)

Looks cool, I'd play but I dont have android

not GOOD cmon i made 955 hahaha
and thank you

[ozgeek]

Reminds me of Doodle Grub on my iphone.

[+jamesyfx]

The gameplay looks fun, others have mentioned the graphics are a bit plain but hey...

I get why the score is transparent but if I were to throw a suggestion I would probably change that to a smaller, opaque number on the top left corner add the high score next to it in different colour so you know what target you have to beat. I'm no game designer though so perhaps my comments mean nothing.

Also I think when you get hit by a red orb something should happen like an explosion or something. Give the game a reason to end (complete destruction) rather than it just being because you hit a red one.

[MarkoO]

yea i can see that
but that game is way better then mine

[Haggis]

468 so far lol

i like it

[MarkoO]

thank you for downloading it if you some how pass 1000 let me now

jamesyfx, on 30 December 2012 - 13:42, said:

The gameplay looks fun, others have mentioned the graphics are a bit plain but hey...

I get why the score is transparent but if I were to throw a suggestion I would probably change that to a smaller, opaque number on the top left corner add the high score next to it in different colour so you know what target you have to beat. I'm no game designer though so perhaps my comments mean nothing.

Also I think when you get hit by a red orb something should happen like an explosion or something. Give the game a reason to end (complete destruction) rather than it just being because you hit a red one.

that is a great idea thank you

[DonnieJim]

made with corona I see.