rpm Posted January 21, 2004 Share Posted January 21, 2004 What do you think? Going to add some new v2.0 of my site. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
forster Posted January 21, 2004 Share Posted January 21, 2004 Touching (Y) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mm3h Posted January 21, 2004 Share Posted January 21, 2004 brings a tiny tear to my eye Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NetGX Posted January 21, 2004 Share Posted January 21, 2004 Very touching Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xpatx Posted January 21, 2004 Share Posted January 21, 2004 i liked it, but i hope you don't get flamed... :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JohnsonBox Posted January 21, 2004 Share Posted January 21, 2004 Touching. But since this is a poem, you should make it as clear as crystal, avoiding any misspelling like "senstations". Otherwise, readers' sensations would not be deeply touched. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
+Dick Montage Subscriber² Posted January 21, 2004 Subscriber² Share Posted January 21, 2004 So who or what is it about? Without that info, I have to say I just read a bunch of lines that could be from Hallmark cards. If I knew the meaning of it, then it may make sense to me. Not a flame, just need to know the context. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
skaife Posted January 21, 2004 Share Posted January 21, 2004 @njlouch - isnt that what poems are about? deciding the context for yourself? :huh: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Borbus Posted January 21, 2004 Share Posted January 21, 2004 @njlouch - isnt that what poems are about? deciding the context for yourself? :huh: No The poem doesn't even have a title and its just a load of random words - some spelt wrong It sounds a bit erotic but has a picture of someone on a dirt bike in the background WTF?! And why is the whole poem within quotes? Is this actually what you said to someone or someone said it to you? I think its crap but don't listen to me I got a C in English. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toxikk Veteran Posted January 21, 2004 Veteran Share Posted January 21, 2004 you are so dream rpm :wub: sike Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rpm Posted January 21, 2004 Author Share Posted January 21, 2004 better watch out.. Bob.. It's from my site RevLimit. Hell I'll listen to you I had to take summer school english. :banghead: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
**marisa** Posted January 21, 2004 Share Posted January 21, 2004 Great stuff alex! (Y) have a p0st wh0re seal of approval! :woot: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rpm Posted January 21, 2004 Author Share Posted January 21, 2004 Thanks Marisa! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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