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Touching. But since this is a poem, you should make it as clear as crystal, avoiding any misspelling like "senstations". Otherwise, readers' sensations would not be deeply touched. :)

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So who or what is it about? Without that info, I have to say I just read a bunch of lines that could be from Hallmark cards.

If I knew the meaning of it, then it may make sense to me.

Not a flame, just need to know the context.

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@njlouch - isnt that what poems are about? deciding the context for yourself? :huh:

No

The poem doesn't even have a title and its just a load of random words - some spelt wrong

It sounds a bit erotic but has a picture of someone on a dirt bike in the background WTF?!

And why is the whole poem within quotes? Is this actually what you said to someone or someone said it to you?

I think its crap but don't listen to me I got a C in English.

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