session Posted January 21, 2004 Share Posted January 21, 2004 The company started to grow and today owns one store and a factory with a total of ten employees all year round. for some reason I don't think this sound right cus you used past tense and then present tense after the 'and' :s I would of broken it down to two sentences tho Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kingbob Posted January 21, 2004 Share Posted January 21, 2004 The company started to grow and today owns one store and a factory with a total of ten employees all year round.Maybe a comma after "...started to grow"?I think it sounds better if you leave out the "a" between "one store and a factory". The company started to grow, and today owns one store and factory with a total of ten employees all year round. Just a guess... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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