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The company started to grow and today owns one store and a factory with a total of ten employees all year round.

for some reason I don't think this sound right cus you used past tense and then present tense after the 'and' :s I would of broken it down to two sentences tho

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The company started to grow and today owns one store and a factory with a total of ten employees all year round.
Maybe a comma after "...started to grow"?

I think it sounds better if you leave out the "a" between "one store and a factory".

The company started to grow, and today owns one store and factory with a total of ten employees all year round.

Just a guess...

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