.Atlantis Posted June 28, 2004 Share Posted June 28, 2004 Comments please :unsure: Unbearable Pain. I hear them arguing, whilst I sit in my chair. Don't want to go in that room, for fear of that bear. I call it a bear, I don't know it's real name. It's the atmosphere inside, and it's acting real tame. The tension is tight, the feeling just right. For a flip of the switch and that very bright light. No room for mis-judgement, no reason to stare. My parents keep shouting, a pain I can not bare. Experimental Enthusiast. Photoshop is open, what can I do? Anything I want, it's imagination, it's true. Feeling of trust between me and this app, I believe it's a male, a funny old chap. It's got lots of features, a colour or two, With noblets and dials I don't know what to do. A tweak over here, a tweak over there, an image of beauty I've made. Without loss of hair. The moral of this story, is never to fear. Art is just art. No matter who wants to hear. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dablitz Posted June 28, 2004 Share Posted June 28, 2004 really good m8 good job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spiegel Posted June 28, 2004 Share Posted June 28, 2004 the first one, im sorry i know how it feels :cry: and the second one i was laffin cuz you are so bored to make a poem about photoshop :D :D i liked them both Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
4CxbqFxVnstmA Veteran Posted June 28, 2004 Veteran Share Posted June 28, 2004 fantastic and moving! post more poems! ! ! :yes: :yes: :yes: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Atlantis Posted June 28, 2004 Author Share Posted June 28, 2004 I don't have anymore poems to create. There's nothing personal to me I can base them off, just yet ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spiegel Posted June 28, 2004 Share Posted June 28, 2004 I don't have anymore poems to create. There's nothing personal to me I can base them off, just yet ;) make one about pron that always hits the "spot" :p Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
4CxbqFxVnstmA Veteran Posted June 28, 2004 Veteran Share Posted June 28, 2004 I don't have anymore poems to create. There's nothing personal to me I can base them off, just yet ;) well, the first one is quite emotive -- very strong. you could try poems on other emotive themes. i guess it's normally a matter of waiting for the inspiration to hit. but when it does, be sure you've got pen and paper to hand! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Atlantis Posted June 28, 2004 Author Share Posted June 28, 2004 well, the first one is quite emotive -- very strong. you could try poems on other emotive themes. i guess it's normally a matter of waiting for the inspiration to hit. but when it does, be sure you've got pen and paper to hand! :) Exactly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Evil Dragon Posted June 28, 2004 Share Posted June 28, 2004 We should have an official poetry thread. I believe we did have one a while ago in MM or something, but I don't believe many peple knew about it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
un0 Posted June 28, 2004 Share Posted June 28, 2004 Can't decide which of the 2 is more disturbing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
adam.sproul Posted June 28, 2004 Share Posted June 28, 2004 Very good, I especially like the first one. I think we should have a poem thread on Neowin. I think that many of the graphics designers out there and on Neowin are very creative, so they create good poetry. Such is an example above. Well done and keep up the good work. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Atlantis Posted June 28, 2004 Author Share Posted June 28, 2004 Thanks for the comments :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mooodi Posted June 28, 2004 Share Posted June 28, 2004 nice stuff... btw wasnt .Atlantis banned? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Atlantis Posted June 28, 2004 Author Share Posted June 28, 2004 nice stuff...btw wasnt .Atlantis banned? Yeah I was Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DoNuTs Posted June 28, 2004 Share Posted June 28, 2004 lol great stuff (Y) Don't mess with Atlantis, i'm he's buddy ! ... I'll tape the fight and put it on kazaa :whistle: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Atlantis Posted June 28, 2004 Author Share Posted June 28, 2004 lol great stuff(Y)) Don't mess with Atlantis, i'm he's buddy ! ... I'll tape the fight and put it on kazaa:whistle:: :laugh:: !!:rofl:: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hum Posted June 28, 2004 Share Posted June 28, 2004 :laugh: Very nice -- keep writing them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
X Statik Process Posted June 28, 2004 Share Posted June 28, 2004 Wow. Really good.... I like it. You have some talent there! (and I mean besides starting a kick-ass "Person Before" thread!) :laugh: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Colin-uk Veteran Posted June 28, 2004 Veteran Share Posted June 28, 2004 nice work :) (Y) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tiagosilva29 Posted June 28, 2004 Share Posted June 28, 2004 Very nice. :yes: I do lots of poetry myself (in portuguese, which is very beautiful, btw). Plus, I don't like to show my work... I'm really paranoid about that! :wacko: I got a guy from a publisher called Pergaminho, who is the main publisher for the >real deal< work, after me. But, I have declined his several offers! :crazy: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZeroBS Posted June 28, 2004 Share Posted June 28, 2004 They are pretty good! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BigDaddy Posted June 28, 2004 Share Posted June 28, 2004 nice.. they're beautiful.. keep up the good work.. (Y) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Atlantis Posted June 29, 2004 Author Share Posted June 29, 2004 Thanks alot people; tiagosilva29: You should take him up on his offer - If not for the money, for the fact that everyone can read something that's so good? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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