2 Poems I created


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Comments please :unsure:

Unbearable Pain.

I hear them arguing, whilst I sit in my chair. Don't want to go in that room, for fear of that bear. I call it a bear, I don't know it's real name. It's the atmosphere inside, and it's acting real tame. The tension is tight, the feeling just right. For a flip of the switch and that very bright light. No room for mis-judgement, no reason to stare. My parents keep shouting, a pain I can not bare.

Experimental Enthusiast.

Photoshop is open, what can I do?

Anything I want, it's imagination, it's true.

Feeling of trust between me and this app,

I believe it's a male, a funny old chap.

It's got lots of features, a colour or two,

With noblets and dials I don't know what to do.

A tweak over here, a tweak over there,

an image of beauty I've made. Without loss of hair.

The moral of this story, is never to fear.

Art is just art. No matter who wants to hear.

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I don't have anymore poems to create. There's nothing personal to me I can base them off, just yet ;)

well, the first one is quite emotive -- very strong. you could try poems on other emotive themes. i guess it's normally a matter of waiting for the inspiration to hit. but when it does, be sure you've got pen and paper to hand! :)

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well, the first one is quite emotive -- very strong. you could try poems on other emotive themes. i guess it's normally a matter of waiting for the inspiration to hit. but when it does, be sure you've got pen and paper to hand! :)

Exactly.

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We should have an official poetry thread. I believe we did have one a while ago in MM or something, but I don't believe many peple knew about it.

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Very good, I especially like the first one. I think we should have a poem thread on Neowin. I think that many of the graphics designers out there and on Neowin are very creative, so they create good poetry. Such is an example above. Well done and keep up the good work. :)

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lol great stuff(Y))

Don't mess with Atlantis, i'm he's buddy !

... I'll tape the fight and put it on kazaa:whistle::

:laugh:: !!:rofl::

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Wow. Really good.... I like it. You have some talent there!

(and I mean besides starting a kick-ass "Person Before" thread!) :laugh:

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Very nice. :yes:

I do lots of poetry myself (in portuguese, which is very beautiful, btw).

Plus, I don't like to show my work... I'm really paranoid about that! :wacko:

I got a guy from a publisher called Pergaminho, who is the main publisher for the >real deal< work, after me. But, I have declined his several offers! :crazy:

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Thanks alot people;

tiagosilva29: You should take him up on his offer - If not for the money, for the fact that everyone can read something that's so good?

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