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does this make sens guys for an intro for and essay im doing

the book is called 'in our town'

its a drama play

so this is my intro

and the question the teacher gave us was

"What are the concerns and how are they realised dramatically"?

this is my intro:

In our town is a very controversial play.

Themes have been the key element and the make up of the play.

Love, Racism, Mateship, and Heroism, are the main themes in the play.

Jack Davis( author) has manifested the themes by the use of subtext, humour, innuendo, etc.

cmon guys help out

due monday

im ****ing mah pants hehee

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Sounds good so far. A tip though....When you make statements like " Its very controversial" be sure to back this up with reasons/evidence explaining how and why it is controversial.

I've seen alot of essays where people make such bold statements and always fall short in marks because they cannot back up what they say. When you write an essay you are making an argument and everything you say needs to have reasons and evidence to suppport it.

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i thought your intro was suppose to be short so thus u dont explain too much

isnt it stating ur thesis

hmmmm can anyone help refining it a little?..

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"In our town" is a very controversial play in which love, racism, mateship, and heroism dominate the play. Jack Davis has used subtext, humor, and innuendo to expand on these themes.

i dunno waht the book is actually about so i cant really expand on this unless u give me some text :D. but gimme some more details and ill try a lil harder at it

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In our town is a very controversial play, featuring Love, Racism, Mateship, and Heroism. Themes have been the key element and the make up of the play, which Jack Davis(the gay author) has manifested by the use of subtext, humour, innuendo, etc.

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well i think your...

intro is what you want to prove.

essay body proves it.

conclusion, umm concludes it.

hehe i wasn't an english major :p and i lost that damn book that tells you all about this junk.

example.

the author is gay.

he is gay cause he is keldyns lover.

as you can see he is very gay :p

lol sorry kel. had to before i goto bed

/Keldyn does his best Mr Garrisson voice. " I am not GAY !!!" :p

~Keldyn

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hahahahah thanks ppl

damn ppl reply fast in day times

i have to go online in the daytime to ask ques to get quick replys hehehe

at night time gees everyones snoozing

all the elite ones are having their little rest hehee

well except some maybe keldyn becoz he livs in aussie land

and aco too ehehe

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ok does this make sense??

"In our town" is a very controversial play in which love, racism, mateship, and herroism are the key elements of the play.

Jack davis has used a variety of techniques to manifest these themes, some of which are: subtext, humour, and innuendo.

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