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SuperMunky    0

Hey fellas, just about finished w/ my new site : http://www.tribualpcsystems.com/tpc/tpc.htm

What do you guys think?

Also, you can mess around with the login if u want, username = username1 password = password1 , invoice number = 0400001

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lhommefm    0

I would say your header looks great but your content area could use some work. It feels cramped (content = same height as your header?) and undefined: the header stands out and the content seems to fade into a mess in the background.

Nice header though. Keep up the good work.

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adamcsays    0

It seems for me the HOME and NETWORKS links do not work... 404.

Looks great though!

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Esoteric    0

I like it, a little too much free space on the right side of the navigation content, and the footer is a huge turn-off

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aitf311    0

yea, if it were me...id make the footer stay on the bottom of the screen and make the content area expand...try and make a fluid layout

also, something that turned me off was having the 3 big images, check out using css to position the backgrounds instead of just popping them in there

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wing.    0

i like it but the big orange part is not needed i think and in its looks screwy

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Eduardo    0

IMO, it needs more polish

* In the menu bar, the text is too big and is not centered

* The images are too heavy

* Very little content (what is the site about?)

* Too big footer

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Eduardo    0

One more thing "Own the competition" doesn't look professional.

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rayjin    1

i agree with Eduardo.. make the footer smaller.. much smaller. and have more content space. I quickly tested out the links and there were quite a few 404s even after the login... the invoice number was not found too.

I do like the header.. but should center Contact Us and Home buttons better.

I also think the middle left and right panels should be less wide so it provides more room for the content pane in the center and maybe increase the font size for this area too.

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SuperMunky    0

Well, to tell you the truth, there's not much content I want on the home page. There's 404s when you click networking/animation/home - networking/animation pages aren't done, and this is a temp host for now, index.html doesn't point to the home page of the site (tpc.htm)

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insanekiwi    0

i liked the layout, but i'd stay with one color, i.e. all blue.

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SuperMunky    0

btw 0400001 should work for the invoice #

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[yt]    0

Pretty good layout overall. I would change the icons you used for each link. Design your own that maybe match your logo. I think that would look cleaner. :)

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sp0rk    0

Good layout but the shadow on the bottom is cut off and the contact us button is a weird size(in Firefox). I also think it would look better if the rounded rectangles weren't stretched. It also stretches the corners and sort of distorts them.

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