escape.artist Posted August 23, 2009 Share Posted August 23, 2009 aw she made an account just to comment on that guy, i bet she'll never use it again lmao D; i like 4 aswell, the blur on the background sorta puts the girl as the focus, though i spose it wont sell the clothes since you cant see alot. i quite like 3 aswell. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MitchLeBlanc Posted August 23, 2009 Share Posted August 23, 2009 I think your photography skills are great... But the after editing could definitely be a bit better... took me 2 seconds just changing some of the curbs & the vibrancy...I think it gives it a little more depth, looks less bland.. I duno tell me what you think. :) Great! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ashpowell Posted August 23, 2009 Share Posted August 23, 2009 Thanks :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
qdave Posted August 24, 2009 Share Posted August 24, 2009 Overall great but you should remove the makeup from under her eyes..blue and green stuff. It looks as if your model cried before the shoot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tunafish Posted August 25, 2009 Author Share Posted August 25, 2009 So you don't think the ones in here http://www.danbriant.com/alex/ are to dark? As i have been told by one person they may be to dark Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Colin-uk Veteran Posted August 25, 2009 Veteran Share Posted August 25, 2009 I think the first girl should smile more, other than that she looks pretty cute :p also agreed with qdave, remove the eye makeup imo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sw1tch.. Posted August 25, 2009 Share Posted August 25, 2009 Hi I am the blonde girl who was modelling in the first photographs.. I am also a photographer. I would just like to point out that yes I am not a size 0 however I do not like people referring to my size as being fat when I am infact only a size 10 - would most people really call that size fat? In comparison to 0 I suppose so. You are cute not fat :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
King Antonius Posted August 25, 2009 Share Posted August 25, 2009 No offense but, those pix will do negative marketing !Hint: she is fat ! No she isn't. You need to get out into the world and see what a real woman looks like. Instead of sitting at your computer fapping to anorexic chicks. Get a real view. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rosestar Posted October 11, 2009 Share Posted October 11, 2009 aw she made an account just to comment on that guy, i bet she'll never use it again lmao D; actually I had this account before making that comment as I was the one who suggested the names for the beartravels bear. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angelic Marge Posted October 11, 2009 Share Posted October 11, 2009 actually I had this account before making that comment as I was the one who suggested the names for the beartravels bear. There's always one makes a comment about weight :rolleyes: You look great in those photos, I wish I was photogenic but I always look like a deranged criminal :wacko: :laugh: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lilrich Posted October 11, 2009 Share Posted October 11, 2009 No offense but, those pix will do negative marketing !Hint: she is fat ! No.4 is fine ! b/w: nice clothes :D The reason the marketing techniques exist in the first place is becuase people shoot stick women in their ads and to be honest i dont find it at all appealing, if i had a clothes shop i would not use a twig in my ads. @tunafish Great shoot, great model, great location ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
carmatic Posted October 11, 2009 Share Posted October 11, 2009 (edited) too much footage and not enough marketing, i think.... what you need to do is somehow make the model and her clothes stand out abit more... i cut out an outline of the model (using a notebook touchpad) and blurred the background ... it looks kinda crude but i hope you can see what im getting at ::edit:: i touched it up abit, slightly less crude now Edited October 11, 2009 by carmatic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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