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I have made this website for a client.

I have just implemented a login/members area feature.

Can you suggest any constructive criticism that you think might improve the design/content?

http://bamfordyc.eu5.org

Best Regards,

James

Experience teaches slowly and at the cost of mistakes.

~ James A. Froude (1818 - 1894)

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To be completely honest, the page is something I would expect in 90s - especially if your target population is 11-15 years old as mentioned on the website.

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Did he pay you to make this? It looks really bad, try adding a white background to the text, use some different fonts and look for some different colours.

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The only thing I found attracting was the Follow me on Twitter banner. It really needs improvement.

Don't give up, continue trying. Use some images too :)

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My comments:

- Logo needs to be improved, you used paint?

- Add some padding to the navigation links and some colors too

- Improve content typography

- Ditch tables, use divs

- Improve the background too, add some noise to it :D

Just my two cents :)

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