Osarius Posted June 1, 2010 Share Posted June 1, 2010 I have made this website for a client. I have just implemented a login/members area feature. Can you suggest any constructive criticism that you think might improve the design/content? http://bamfordyc.eu5.org Best Regards, James Experience teaches slowly and at the cost of mistakes. ~ James A. Froude (1818 - 1894) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 deactivated01032015 Posted June 1, 2010 Share Posted June 1, 2010 To be completely honest, the page is something I would expect in 90s - especially if your target population is 11-15 years old as mentioned on the website. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Jan Veteran Posted June 1, 2010 Veteran Share Posted June 1, 2010 Did he pay you to make this? It looks really bad, try adding a white background to the text, use some different fonts and look for some different colours. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Nicholas P. Posted June 1, 2010 Share Posted June 1, 2010 Lots of ideas and resources. Dynamic Drive Web Design Info Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 RoomKid Posted June 1, 2010 Share Posted June 1, 2010 The only thing I found attracting was the Follow me on Twitter banner. It really needs improvement. Don't give up, continue trying. Use some images too :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 nub Posted June 1, 2010 Share Posted June 1, 2010 Its pretty bad tbh. Look at other websites then compare it to yours. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 RoomKid Posted June 1, 2010 Share Posted June 1, 2010 My comments: - Logo needs to be improved, you used paint? - Add some padding to the navigation links and some colors too - Improve content typography - Ditch tables, use divs - Improve the background too, add some noise to it :D Just my two cents :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Osarius
I have made this website for a client.
I have just implemented a login/members area feature.
Can you suggest any constructive criticism that you think might improve the design/content?
http://bamfordyc.eu5.org
Best Regards,
James
Experience teaches slowly and at the cost of mistakes.
~ James A. Froude (1818 - 1894)
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