ACTIONpack Posted October 14, 2016 Share Posted October 14, 2016 I'm not a video/film person but am a graphic and web designer. I had worked on edit over 15 years ago for end tags for music videos to showcase who did encoding of the video. People would download the music video and watch it as they please. This was before youtube and when I was 18 years old. Now the company needed to make a video, to show how to apply our product on brick. They didn't want to spend $1000s to make it so I told them I could do it. Would like to know what you think about it and I believe I did a pretty good job for a first time making a short video of anything. I use my Lumia 950 (Don't use anymore) and edited on a Macbook Pro 15 (Mid 2012) and use Premiere Pro. +Gary7 and Jim K 2 Share Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
+E.Worm Jimmy Subscriber¹ Posted October 14, 2016 Subscriber¹ Share Posted October 14, 2016 Video is good showing of the process. I like it. However, I fail to see what is the purpose of this white wash. To me it looks terrible. When you painted it white, I expected it to look nice, then with the wash it made it look unfinished, out of place and not attractive. This is not a comment on your work though at the edit was good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wakjak Posted October 14, 2016 Share Posted October 14, 2016 Good video, but that audio, sounds like the brush strokes were added in after the fact.. and the damp cloth sounds... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jose_49 Posted October 14, 2016 Share Posted October 14, 2016 Somehow from 1:05 to 1:15 I felt a strange satisfaction seeing that brush. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
techbeck Posted October 14, 2016 Share Posted October 14, 2016 The brush noises and spray bottle noise seem to distract from the video. IMO, would be better to not have the background sound at all and just the music playing. Otherwise, I like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ravensky Posted October 14, 2016 Share Posted October 14, 2016 I liked it, thought you did a great job!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jim K Global Moderator Posted October 14, 2016 Global Moderator Share Posted October 14, 2016 Great video .... easy to follow ... easy on the ears. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
+devHead Subscriber² Posted October 15, 2016 Subscriber² Share Posted October 15, 2016 Nice video presentation, very professional. I do agree with some of the other comments regarding the effects sound over of brushing; it doesn't seem quite in sync with the video. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
+Gary7 Subscriber² Posted October 15, 2016 Subscriber² Share Posted October 15, 2016 Very profession video great job. I just do not like when people paint over brick. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dick Montage Posted October 15, 2016 Share Posted October 15, 2016 Actually pretty good. A few comments: You have white text over white brickwork at one point. The opening shot, the light is pouring in and ruining the shot. Some of the shots "along" the fireplace when being painted are really quite nice. Buy a tripod. Too much wobble. Don't need to spend over $40 for the type of tripod that will suit these needs. Sometimes the lighting is a bit off - look at "grading" your footage to rectify. 1 hour ago, E.worm Jimmy said: Video is good showing of the process. I like it. However, I fail to see what is the purpose of this white wash. To me it looks terrible. When you painted it white, I expected it to look nice, then with the wash it made it look unfinished, out of place and not attractive. This is not a comment on your work though at the edit was good In the UK that style would be called "shabby chic" by pretentious idiots who wear tweed, have beards and marry women at weddings with gingham bunting with a cake made of cheeses. +E.Worm Jimmy 1 Share Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ACTIONpack Posted October 15, 2016 Author Share Posted October 15, 2016 Yea the white text was somewhat I quick use and want us to look simple and should had but a little background to it. Also the brush stroke sound was not edited. That's all from my Lumia 950 mic. Dick Montage 1 Share Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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