0 Pox Posted November 27, 2005 Share Posted November 27, 2005 like... ew :x that logo isnt the neowin5 logo, and you've done a pretty bad job (no offense) of cutting it out... and i would have made the text pure white with a subtle glow. here's the official promo: https://www.neowin.net/preview/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Pox Posted November 27, 2005 Share Posted November 27, 2005 like... ew :x that logo isnt the neowin5 logo, and you've done a pretty bad job (no offense) of cutting it out... and i would have made the text pure white with a subtle glow. here's the official promo: https://www.neowin.net/preview/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Daniel Tablas Posted November 27, 2005 Share Posted November 27, 2005 like... ew :x 586860772[/snapback] :rofl: I agree with Pox though, it doesn't look that great. The neowin logo looks very random, and the choice of font colour is too light. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 teh h4x0r5 Posted November 27, 2005 Share Posted November 27, 2005 Umm.. what can I say? It's truly awful! :x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Neil Posted November 27, 2005 Share Posted November 27, 2005 mspaint has turned over in its grave 586860780[/snapback] :rofl: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 AcdShdw Posted November 27, 2005 Share Posted November 27, 2005 mspaint has turned over in its grave Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Lee G. Veteran Posted November 27, 2005 Veteran Share Posted November 27, 2005 Sorry, I don't like it :no: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Julius Caro Posted November 27, 2005 Share Posted November 27, 2005 I like it. Maybe using the actual blue logo and adding some dropshadow to that text would make it look great :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Morgan Posted November 27, 2005 Share Posted November 27, 2005 Ummm no. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Sane404 Posted November 27, 2005 Share Posted November 27, 2005 :x :x :x :x :x :x :x :x :x :x :x :x :x :x :x :x :x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Ianmac45 Posted November 27, 2005 Share Posted November 27, 2005 LOL tha'ts not a theme! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 wratho Posted November 27, 2005 Share Posted November 27, 2005 your work is really bad, sorry..but i like your idea :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Andrew Lyle Global Moderator Posted November 27, 2005 Global Moderator Share Posted November 27, 2005 mspaint has turned over in its grave 586860780[/snapback] lmao!!! sorry, but that is :x :x :x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Code.Red Posted November 27, 2005 Share Posted November 27, 2005 The idea is pretty good, the presentation wasn't that great. Change the text to be white, maybe with a drop shadow or a slight glow, and the logo needs to be changed also. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 amroth Posted November 27, 2005 Share Posted November 27, 2005 heehhehe. the image was not a very nice things to see. the idea was good. good advertising idea, that's the best. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Pox Posted November 27, 2005 Share Posted November 27, 2005 here we go, i've drawn on your idea, it was good. the graphics work, however, wasnt. this is all original artwork, yes i made the hills :p no i didnt design the logo :p but i traced the vector :blink: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Rob Veteran Posted November 27, 2005 Veteran Share Posted November 27, 2005 (edited) Umm... Umm... The compression on the image isn't bad. Good job on having no JPG artifacts. Edit: For future reference, please note the original poster has edited the image and replaced it with a better one. The comments above refer to the initial image. The lens flare and work on the logo have improved it no end, and I congratulate the original poster for doing some great alterations. Edited November 27, 2005 by Rob Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 White Malteser Posted November 27, 2005 Share Posted November 27, 2005 How about we don't flame the guy for lack of skill, and help him improve his work. If your child came home and showed you a mess, would you call it utter crap, just because they havn't aquired the set skill yet? No. Same applies folks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Pox Posted November 27, 2005 Share Posted November 27, 2005 Umm...Umm... The compression on the image isn't bad. Good job on having no JPG artifacts. 586860907[/snapback] :laugh: PMSL always one to find a good point, rob :p Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Arctice Posted November 27, 2005 Author Share Posted November 27, 2005 I updated it, added a few things, changed the logo, etc. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Pox Posted November 27, 2005 Share Posted November 27, 2005 I updated it, added a few things, changed the logo, etc. 586860923[/snapback] yeah... um, not much better. it's a bit dark, and the text is still :x make it white with white glow. the sun flare on the logo isn't bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 macro Posted November 27, 2005 Share Posted November 27, 2005 It's a good concept, but you need more blue in it definitely. Don't feel bad about the people ganging up on you, some people don't know how to criticize contructively and you can't blame them for not knowing, so definitely keep up the efforts! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Rob Veteran Posted November 27, 2005 Veteran Share Posted November 27, 2005 (edited) How about we don't flame the guy for lack of skill, and help him improve his work.If your child came home and showed you a mess, would you call it utter crap, just because they havn't aquired the set skill yet? No. Same applies folks. 586860931[/snapback] Aw come on, if he'd had spent hours on it we wouldn't have been so harsh. It was clearly done v. quickly and without much thought (the logo for example). As for the child analogy, it's a bit difficult to use in this situation: your child wouldn't post his artwork on Neowin in a graphic designers subforum, that's the point. The new one you've done is a lot better, I mean a LOT better. A lot people put lens flares in for the sake of it, but in your design it actually works. Added to which the logo is a lot better. Edited November 27, 2005 by Rob Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 White Malteser Posted November 27, 2005 Share Posted November 27, 2005 Aw come on, if he'd had spent hours on it we wouldn't have been so harsh. It was clearly done v. quickly and without much thought (the logo for example). As for the child analogy, it's a bit difficult to use in this situation: your child wouldn't post his artwork on Neowin in a graphic designers subforum, that's the point.The new one you've done is a lot better, I mean a LOT better. 586860937[/snapback] That doesn't make a single ounce of difference, would you tell your child not to enter his/her work into an art competition because you yourself find it awful? No. He posted it on here, in hope of some constructive critisism. Not to be put down as if he shouldn't even try. Everyone starts somewhere, and to block this person from wanting to pursue further in learning, is just bullying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Pox Posted November 27, 2005 Share Posted November 27, 2005 [h4x0r], he asked for feedback, we're giving him feedback. sure, a lot of people have been posting :x eww but most have them have pointed out problems as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 macro Posted November 27, 2005 Share Posted November 27, 2005 Aw come on, if he'd had spent hours on it we wouldn't have been so harsh. It was clearly done v. quickly and without much thought (the logo for example). As for the child analogy, it's a bit difficult to use in this situation: your child wouldn't post his artwork on Neowin in a graphic designers subforum, that's the point.The new one you've done is a lot better, I mean a LOT better. 586860937[/snapback] How do you know though? He could have spent a long time working at it. If it's one of the first things he's done I'm sure he did. And regardless of how much time he spent, you can still find a nicer way to criticize and give thoughtful suggestions that actually contribute to the thread. Not you in particular, I'm just saying in general, it's better to encourage someone to improve than to put them down. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Question
Pox
like... ew :x
that logo isnt the neowin5 logo, and you've done a pretty bad job (no offense) of cutting it out... and i would have made the text pure white with a subtle glow.
here's the official promo:
https://www.neowin.net/preview/
Link to comment
Share on other sites
59 answers to this question
Recommended Posts