Views on image for website

[Unimatrix Xero]

Hi guys

Im interested to see what you guys think of my draft for my new website

ive had the ribbon design done for me, but im interested in what people think of the text placement and also the text design, ive tried to keep the style going can i have some views please?

[Unimatrix Xero]

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Not sure if it has been pointed out. But seriously omega-computing? Perhaps it's just a spare domain you had lying around? But domains are what ?8 a year, I'm sure you can come up with a better name, that actually relates to the product your selling.

im not just selling Points, the point section is a side line but im just advertising it more at the moment, jesus whats this hammer the new business guy today or what?

Im just trying my best at gfx design which im ok at and i like the name so i went for it

Edited January 2, 2010 by Laura

[_BeanZ_]

One quick thing on the name - I know everyone said to drop the space, but if the actual domain name is hyphenated, surely it makes says to keep the hyphen in the branding of the site if you're using the .co.uk as well.

[Lilrich]

I am not sure that if i was someone looking for a service you provide and i was not computer savvy i would have a hard time finding some of them links, i know for sure that if my dad wanted some wii points for example and he turned up here he would leave the site due to not being able to read the text due to the multitude of colours and the rather large image that you have used which is distracting from the main objective of the website which to me seems like getting people to buy products from you.

That BIG image draws you in straight away, maybe something smaller and a better navigation?

Not hate posting just my two cents (don't hate me)

[fhpuqrgrpgvirzhpujbj]

You really need to get rid of all the text you blatantly stole from competitor's websites.

Also your about page is a bit misleading:

To date we have sold over 43,400 Marketplace Points and over 20 year of X-Box Live Gold Menberships

That means you've only sold between 8 and 20 Point cards and 20 live subscriptions. The page phrases it misleadingly (mostly the points thing)

Edited January 2, 2010 by omnicoder

[Lilrich]

You really need to get rid of all the text you blatantly stole from competitor's websites.

Do you fancy providing some evidence <snipped>?

Edited January 2, 2010 by Calum
The community rules ask you not to state that you will report posts

[+Frank B. Subscriber²]

Do you fancy providing some evidence <snipped>?

Evidence was posted before: Click.

Edited January 2, 2010 by Calum
Editing the quote because the original post was edited

[Unimatrix Xero]

as already stated i had someone else to the text for me and as already stated thats on my list of thing to do, but running a business is hard and take alot of time

[Woj]

^ Was just about to say, this appears to be a direct rip from here.

[Unimatrix Xero]

CAN WE GET BACK ON TOPIC PLEASE

FFS!!!!

I'LL SAY AGAIN ITS ON MY LIST OF THINGS TO DO!!

and for your information i know the owners of cheapxboxlivecode.com and i already have permission for that but i didnt know about the other rips

[Woj]

Sorry, you responded before I clicked reply so I didn't see your post. I think everyone is just trying to be honest and make sure that no one gets anything stolen from anywhere else. I know how long it can take to set up a website, good luck to you. (Y)

[+Nik Louch Subscriber²]

Hey mate, I'm on side with you but an argument such as "as already stated i had someone else to the text for me and as already stated thats on my list of thing to do, but running a business is hard and take alot of time" holds no water. Running a business does take time and is hard. If you can't manage it, don't - but stealing text is a big no-no. Lorem Ipsum it for now? Just saying for your own protection :)

[fhpuqrgrpgvirzhpujbj]

Websites stolen from:

http://xboxlivesubscriptioncodes.net/microsoft-points/

http://electronicfirst.com/updates-recent-...box-live-codes/

http://www.instantlivecodes.com/support.html

http://cheapxboxlivecodes.com/cheap-micros...ft-4200-points/

It doesn't matter if someone else did it for you or if you plan to fix it. It's theft.

[StealMySoda]

I'm not trying to rip you Unimatrix, simply stating a fact. If I was looking to buy xbox live points (which I am not), if I came across a website named:

xboxlivepoints.com or omegacomputering.co.uk/shop, I know 99/100 people will buy from xboxlivepoints.

[Unimatrix Xero]

FFS how many more ****ing times do i have to say im working on it, dont people bother reading ****ing posts before they ****ing reply.. jesus h christ

I'LL SAY ONE MORE TIME FOR THE IDIOTS HERE

ITS ON MY LIST OF THINGS TO FIX I WILL GET ROUND TO IT IN TIME

[Kenji]

INB4LOCK

[fhpuqrgrpgvirzhpujbj]

FFS how many more ****ing times do i have to say im working on it, dont people bother reading ****ing posts before they ****ing reply.. jesus h christ

I'LL SAY ONE MORE TIME FOR THE IDIOTS HERE

ITS ON MY LIST OF THINGS TO FIX I WILL GET ROUND TO IT IN TIME

This is the same thing that happens in threads where people using pirated software ask for help and are found out. It's the way things work. You steal, most people won't help you. Fairly simple.

[_bobcat_ Veteran]

Ya, this got too messy, thread closed.